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Haydn by =Shinigami-Shintai:iconShinigami-Shintai:

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Finally! I've been doing this one for like.. a month? DONE.

I adore Haydn. He's one of those characters that just.. You know how if you have an idea for someone, and you draw it out exactly like you wanted? He's one of those. :heart:

The only this was that I had a hard time deciding his colors. x3; I asked several people to help with that, and this is what we came up with!

...I really hate fishnets now, but they're so damn sexy. *o*

A little about him? He's the current pack leader, calm, not easily annoyed or angered, but it does happen, the lead singer of that band the twins are in, HOWL. And he smokes. That's why he stays calm. >w> Without smokes, he gets a bit pissy.

I like his hair.. ...And face.

Also, I know the vest's coloring's a bit sloppy. x.x; I was rolling about in tummy pain doing that part.

Other than that, I think I'll request some critique. owo

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=Jakumetsu Jun 5, 2009, 9:49:37 PM
Liam was like that for me, I pictured him and he came out exactly like I had him in my head <3

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=Shinigami-Shintai Jun 5, 2009, 9:52:07 PM
<3 Him and Liam must be friends. x3

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*Serpenaya Jun 6, 2009, 9:46:56 AM
The only issues I see at all are the fact that you may have wanted to mak the body less elongated. He looks slightly stretched.
The elbow to the left of the picture, well, I'd have to show you in paint what's wrong there. It's not a bad thing though, you can hardly tell.
Next time, look up pictures of bare stomached males. From where the legs connect to the hips, above that, there are two creases going up male's sides from muscle; and if he's a werewolf, I seriously doubt he's all skin and bones.
The final tip is to round off his chin slightly. It looks a little too tipped- nothing that a little bit of erasing some of that layer won't fix.
If you want me to further critique you, I'll do it when I come to your house. <3

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=Shinigami-Shintai Jun 6, 2009, 12:28:47 PM
:heart:

It's done now and I'm not going to spend anymore time on it, but I'll keep all that in mind for future reference. x3;
I wanted him to be extremely skinny for the sake of... ....Well... Because. x3; I figure that werewolves can really have any body type, ya know? Plus, smoking takes mass away horribly. My brother used to smoke and he's still not recovered his meats. You'll see. owo

As for the tummy... Dx; I had it drawn on the sketch, but I forgot to shade that part. Dumb. x.x;

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*MarinaTsunamia Jun 7, 2009, 4:28:35 AM
Saru took my critique for the most part. .___.

Long torso and pointy chin are what I mainly see. I know what Saru is speaking of about the elbow as well.

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Yeah, Saru said it all already. ><; lol

Cool style though. Your vectors are neat. What I do with fishnet is that I create my own patterns on photoshop so all I have to do is "select and fill". It's extremely helful and cuts fishnetting time down. Course...it usually doesn't look as good as what you do. Curves and whatnot are missing with my technique.

I luff his hair. :heart: Blond wolfie. :3

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=Shinigami-Shintai Jun 7, 2009, 10:58:55 AM
He totally bleaches his hair. You can tell by his ears!

I have no idea how to do patterns in PS. x.x; Grouping is everything for me.

I'll have to have Ruru show me with the elbow.. I don't get it. Dx

..It seems like my torsos are always really long... owo;;

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*MarinaTsunamia Jun 7, 2009, 11:06:56 AM
Ya, but his ears aren't that much different. They still seem to be a dirty blond. :3

To make patterns, you open up a new file with a transparent BG and then draw your design... then somewhere (I think under edit), you use the option "Save pattern as..."

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=Shinigami-Shintai Jun 7, 2009, 11:10:48 AM
I see.. owo I'll have to play with that sometime.

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